Go through the Ranch and find the chicken coop and the cattle drive.
Chicken Coop is code style suggestions; I personally think they are too strict, but you will get better coding by following them.
The exercises in the Cattle Ranch are to help develop good style.
We shall tell you if we think the code you quote is bad style.
Now I am super curious what sports would be like if we allowed drugs and tiny ads.
a bit of art, as a gift, the permaculture playing cards
